hahah now that ive got your attention...i wanted to ask if someone whoever has the time to read my poems, i know this is annoying and i know everyone must do this but i really really really want feedback cos i think my poems are good but cant prove it cos no one has read them :(
Anyone who has time....please...i'll return the favour...
here a taste of one of my poems
Letting go
Why has it become so hard now?
To say what used to be said with such ease
I merely become frustrated
As if my mind is being teased
The fights have become more constant
More than one a day
We argue about everything and anything
But u never really listen to what I have to say
Im not a little girl anymore
So stop pressing me into that mould
I’m starting to become a woman
And your grip should start to unfold
I know im only a 16 year old girl
But im not too young to say
I learn more and become more independent
With every passing day
Sometimes you need to lend me your ears
And sometimes even your heart
And you need to keep on doing so
Otherwise it will all fall apart
I don’t want to fight anymore
All it does is cause hurt and pain
Why cant it be like it used to?
Will it ever be the same again?
You keep talking to me as if I don’t understand
But im starting to think its not me but you
Im growing up and you need to accept that
And I need to accept that too
I no longer need you to tell me anymore
The difference between right and wrong
I can distinguish the difference myself
You might not realise it but im strong
I hope that by reading this poem
You will understand
I’m not a 5 yr old girl anymore
That always needs you to hold my hand
And im not that little girl
That would always be by your side
Or the little girl that
Would yell out to you on the ride
Im a mature, independent teenager
Growing older with every glance
And I could become such a better person
If you only just gave me a chance
So with this I believe I should say
I love you mum but don’t hold on too tight
You’ve been with me thu it all, I wont forget you
But just let me live my life
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