Thread Topic: Yet another poem
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shades of gray
Joined: Oct 23, '09
Status: Junior User |
2009-11-14 13:34:27 |
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The Walls are fallin', another strong stricter crumbles to the floor, the days all callin', there numbered, sometime you gotta go, a scared and withered shell, but some light still lurks inside everyone tells a story, memories lay with me through all of time Warmth trickles down, in the form of red, sweet life, just to feel somethin', just to get through time, and I hear my self callin', but it's not my own name, as I look in the mirror, it's a cruil twist of fate, trickin' myself, is it for protection? If I do it alone I can do it to the world, as things fall down, things have to rise, fairness fall, fear rises, selfworth fall, critisism rises, opening the gate but still I can't escape, again the blood flows, if only for a while, before I hit the tiled, hard, stone, cold floor, but I get up and do it again, still waiting for dead, it's taking its time, tourches slowley, my last thoughts; how will you react? Would you care if I go? Would you cry? Would the smugness surounding you gather as a grin on that face I onced longed for? If I go I'll never know fight somemore, I bid you adu unroll tomorrow and then the sorry takes over again. I hit the floor death at my door, warm blood rolling, cold heart stalling, feeling nothing, but the weight of the world. How's itt then, it pass y'alls jusgemt? S'another pice of crap I wrote to make myself think I have a tallent, a connection with other people. Insight on the human condition. Iv tried to be deep. Best I could do in 10 mind be brutial, illthink your being pittyfull anyway. Xxx |
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Unanswered Thread: Nuclear Apocalypse posted by Gumba Gumba 6 hours ago |
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K8bpd
Joined: Oct 25, '09
Status: Junior User |
2009-11-14 14:06:26 |
| Very moving...I truely enjoyed it...no pity here :) | |
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shades of gray
Joined: Oct 23, '09
Status: Junior User |
2009-11-14 15:21:22 |
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It's really not good. I wish I'd never posted itt, get what it's about? Xx |
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Unanswered Thread: Gumba da big dada posted by Gumba Gumba 6 hours ago |
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